Jen Karetnick


Peak Intensities: A Doctored Pastoral

My husband comes nude into the house
every night, having shed the faded scrubs
in the garage where the washing machine
will soap them free of contagion. Over
his midlife belly, a field of divots
from a colectomy, cancer,

he lifts one unsheathed hand in greeting
across the measured distance of the living

room before disappearing upstairs to shower,
where the water runs peridot before clearing,
where the faucet hitches as if in breath. I hear
him coughing, too, this man, once so green
he believed there was hope

to be found in hospital. Now it’s hostile,
a place described as the “front lines,”

the rooms where he goes to do what
he has always done. How well he knows
what it is to battle for life. Later, sterile
as a single kiwi plant, he takes

the dogs for a walk safe enough away
from neighbors riding their bicycles.

This is the time of day we used to call golden,
tropical light curled over leaves closing up
for evening, the final gleam

projecting through spokes of wheels that look
as if they are spinning backwards, creating

a slide show we now need to believe to see.

 



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Jen Karetnick's fourth full-length book is The Burning Where Breath Used to Be (David Robert Books, September 2020), an Eric Hoffer Poetry Category Finalist and a Kops-Fetherling Honorable Mention. She is also the author of Hunger Until It's Pain (Salmon Poetry, forthcoming spring 2023) in addition to six other collections. Karetnick has won the Tiferet Writing Contest for Poetry, the Split Split Rock Review Chapbook Competition, the Hart Crane Memorial Prize, and the Anna Davidson Rosenberg Prize, among others. Co-founder and managing editor of SWWIM Every Day, she has work forthcoming in Cider Press Review, The Comstock Review, DIALOGIST, The Shore, and Sweet: Lit. Based in Miami, she works as a lifestyle journalist and trade-book author. Find her on Twitter @Kavetchnik and Instagram @JenKaretnick, or see jkaretnick.com.

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